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Monday 29 October 2012

The forest

The story is about the forest. There are two men going that way. They are wearing back packs. They are going far away and they know where they are going. I do not know where they are going.

I can see two men.
I can see that the men are walking.
I can see lots of trees.
I can see the road.
The trees are green.

2 comments:

Tana said...

Hi Niuma

That was a good story. But next time work on your spelling.
That was good writing .Keep up the good work.

Lave said...

Hi Niuma

That was a good story.But next time prove read your writing and keep up the good work.

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